tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2772108671442268594.post1274512014346121784..comments2010-08-19T23:41:36.303-07:00Comments on The Coterie Blog: Dwelling in the DarkMcClain House of Painhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07722940530694954357noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2772108671442268594.post-48909240160301910642010-07-22T21:19:41.765-07:002010-07-22T21:19:41.765-07:00In the second stanza, I talk about the Butterfly E...In the second stanza, I talk about the Butterfly Effect, which is an abstract concept, which is a no-no in poetry. Instead, I should talk about "stepping on butterflies" because that's concrete and alludes to the butterfly effect.McClain House of Painhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07722940530694954357noreply@blogger.com